Senryuu Shoujo – 02

(Nanako no Daietto)
“Nanako’s Diet”

Translation

Would you sacrificeExactness of translationFor syllable count?

 

Siblings

Single children askFor siblings. Those with siblingsWould take the exchange.

 

Popularity

PopularityIs sought most zealously byThe unlikable.

 

Diets

If my gym trainerWas a pink-haired genki girlI would exercise.

 

The Friend Zone

I will not believeThat platonic childhood friendsCan beat teen hormones.

 

Full-length images: 16, 27.

 

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6 Comments

  1. Trippwire

    Passerby is greatat writing first impressionsin poetry form.

  2. Underdogs

    Childhood friends are greatYet their loss is guaranteedEndless suffering

  3. Passerby is smoothHis haiku game is too strongFor other writers(I especially liked Diets)

  4. Wanderer

    Gotta agree about siblings. They are nowhere near as fun as people without them seem to think.(No, I’m not even going to try to write in senryuu. I refuse.)

  5. Guile

    I’m wondering if I’ve forgotten more aboutthe manga than I thought. I don’t remember this girl at all.

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